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Writing a film logline

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How to Write a Logline

A one-sentence program summary in TV Guide is a log line.[1]

Examples[edit]

Charlie Brown is finally invited to a Halloween party; Snoopy engages the Red Baron in a dogfight; and Linus waits patiently in the pumpkin patch for the Great Pumpkin.

A talented but irresponsible teenager schemes to steal his college tuition money when his wealthy father refuses to pay for him to study acting at Juilliard.

The logline for Star Trek was "Wagon Train in Space". Wagon Train had been a high-profile TV show, and anyone hearing the logline would immediately know what Star Trek was about.

This logline is a bit longer, but it’s still a succinct, easy to follow sentence. It includes the main character, the goal, and the main action. The conflict isn’t included specifically, but the reader can quickly assume that this kid is going to get backlash from a few sources: his parents, fellow students, the administration, maybe even a local family-values group.

As you may have gathered, there isn’t really a single set of rules for how to write a logline. The best logline for your script is going to depend on your genre, your subject matter, and your personal style. That said, there are a few rules for how not to write a logline.

How Not to Write a Logline

  1. Don’t overlook the main character, the conflict, or the stakes.

Ideally you’ll also include the villain (if you have one) and the setting.

This logline breaks a few of the standard logline rules. It’s an appropriate length and it’s to the point, but it doesn’t really give us a sense of what’s standing in Sophia’s way. The conflict is only hinted at in the subtext of this logline, which is usually a bad idea. However, because this script is about a historical figure whom we’ve probably all heard of (even if we’re not familiar with the details of her life) Kristina can get away with being a bit vague since anyone who reads this logline should have a basic understanding of the obstacles Sophia might have faced.

The next highest-rated script, Rockingham by Adam Morrison, breaks the rules in the same way:

“A look into the mania of the OJ Simpson trial, through the eyes of Simpson’s sports agent Mike Gilbert and Los Angeles Police Department Detective Mark Fuhrman.

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Writing a screenplay is a challenge. Writing a screenplay worthy of the attention of top agents and producers is a monumental endeavor. It takes years of practice, study of the craft, and faith in oneself. Unfortunately, once you’ve written a script worthy of production, there’s still one obstacle that stands in your way: the logline.

The logline is an art form all its own. It’s a one sentence poem, an ode to your script and the film it could become. It must be concise yet thorough, imaginative yet simple, commercial yet unique. So what’s the trick? What’s the formula for writing a logline that accurately and compellingly conveys the essence of your script?

Sadly, there isn’t one. Consider the following logline examples to understand why.

Even more ideally, have someone who can provide you with professional, confidential feedback read it.

Over at LA Screenwriter we’ve started a monthly logline competition that provides just that. For $9.90, you can send us your loglines and we’ll send you back detailed feedback in five days or less. If yours is one of the three best loglines we receive each month, you’ll also win recognition and prizes from our sponsors. Check out the LA Screenwriter Logline Competition website to learn more and get feedback on your best loglines.

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Yolanda Beasley, Write For Hollywood

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    Pretty sure most involved in the marketing ( and writing? ) of the film don"t much care about what the existing fans would like.

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    It"s so sad that my creative writing always has to suffer because of responsibilities. why isn"t creative writing a responsibility!? : (

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